Chapter 2 Comparison

This is the second chapter of the series. Much like the previous, Del-Ray edited dialogue to fit in dirty jokes and once again referenced Anya as Negi's sister. While it's not as mistaken-ridden as the first chapter, it's still quite a bit different at parts.

You can see a full comparison below!

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	Takahata-sensei… Um...		Takahata-sensei... Um.
	I made you some delicious tea.		I've made some delicious tea.
	I was wondering if you’d like some.		Won't you have some?

	Let me guess: love potion, right?		This is a love potion, isn't it?
	You don’t need this.		You don't need this.

	I...		Eh...?
	I don’t, sir?		Whatever do you mean...?

	I’ve always loved you!		I mean that I already love you.
	Wha-t!?		Ehh!?

	Oh...		Ah...

	Asuna-kun...		Asuna-kun...
	Ta-Takahata-sensei...		T-Takahata-sensei...

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	Takahata-sensei…		Takahata-sen... se...
	Hmm...		...
	…!?		Nn...
	ZZZ		ZZZ

	AIEEEEEEE		KYAAAAAA!

	He-		H-
	Hey…		Hey!
	...What are you doing in my bed!?		Why are you sleeping in my bed!?

	Umm...		Mm...?
	Sis...		Onē-chan...
	Whoa!!!		Ah!?

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	A-Asuna-san!?		A-Asuna-san!?
	I-I-I’m so sorry! I used to sleep in the same room as my sister and I just…		I-I-I-I'm sorry, I didn't mean to! I used to always sleep with Onē-chan, so...
	What do I have to do...		Wh-what the heck!?
	...tie you to the sofa!?		Ugh, you're such a baby!
	Nah, knowing you, you’d like that!		We gave you the sofa to sleep on!!

	Oh no!! It’s 5 AM! Gotta move!		Wah!! Oh no, it's already five! I'm off, Konoka!
	Where’s Asuna-san going?		Where is Asuna-san going?
	Hmmm, her job.		Mm? To work.

	I’ll make eggs for breakfast, Negi-kun.		I'll make breakfast for you, Negi-kun.
	You want yours scrambled or sunny side up?		Would you like your eggs scrambled or sunny-side-up?

	Uh...		Oh...
	Sunny side up, I guess.		Sunny-side-up, please.
	Thanks		Thank you.

	Got it. <3		Roger that <3

	...		......
	That’s right.		That's right...

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	My staying here was good for all of us.		I'm at Mahora Academy in Japan. I came here to be a teacher.
	I think Asuna-san, Konoka-san and I are really bonding.		And last night, Asuna-san and Konoka-san let me stay in their room.
	Food’s on!		Negi-kun! Time to eat!

	Negi, you jerk!		Argh!

	Would it have killed you to put the toilet seat down?!		I was late to work, too!
	I didn’t need more delays, thanks!		Seriously, I should not have let you stay with us!
	Gimme a break, would you?		Nngh, it's not my fault...
	You guys need to get along.		You two just can't get along, can you?

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	Let’s not forget something.		Listen up.
	Ye-Yes!?		Y-Yes'm!?

	I’m the only one who knows you’re a magician.		I'm the only one who knows that you're really a wizard.
	You… You’re bluffing. You wouldn’t --		If you don't shape up, I'll tell everyone. I'll tell the press, and your class!

	I imagine you’ll be burned at the stake. Yo! Everybody! Magician, right over here!		And then it'll be all over the news! You'll be burned at the stake as a witch! Burned!
	Okay, okay, I believe you!		Eehhh!?

	So no more clothes yanking, got it?		I'm kidding. But you better do everything I say.
	Deal.		Nngh, but I'm your teacher....
	?		?

	...		......

	So, uhm...are you still interested in that love potion I mentioned yesterday?		Um... What do you want me to do about the love potion I mentioned yesterday? I really can make it in four months....

	Hmm…?		Eh...?

	What’s with the mixed signals, huh?!		Wh... Wh-Wha... How can you say that!!?
	ARGH		Waah!

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	You’re the one who said courage is the truest form of magic.		You're the one who said courage is the real magic.
	I’ll do this on my own, thanks.		I'll do this on my own.

	Oh…		Ah...
	Well...good for her! Maybe I actually taught her something!		I-I'm impressed! She really is nicer than she looks....

	Good going, Asuna-san.		Wow, Asuna-san.
	And if she can find courage… Face difficulties…		I have to work hard, too.

	Then I bet I can do the same thing.		I'll be the best teacher I can from now until March...
	...so I can become a Magister Magi like my grandfather.		And become a Magister Magi like Ojī-chan.

	Hm?		Mm?
	Hmmm.		Hmmm.
	Stupid out-of-reach locker.		I can't reach....

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	Good morning, Negi-sensei.		Good morning, Negi-sensei.
	I'll walk you to our classroom.		I'll walk you to our classroom.
	Th-Thank you.		Th-Thank you.

	You're... Ayaka Yukihiro, right? Class Rep?		Good morning, Class Rep-san.
	Getting our names down quickly, I see. Did you sleep well?		Ayaka Yukihiro. Did you sleep well last night?
	Yes, thanks.		Yes, very well.

	Oh...		Ah...

	Oh...		Ah!
	Good morning.		Good morning, Miyazaki-san!
	Go-Good morning.		G... Good morning.

	Teacher approaches!		S-
	Stand!		Stand!

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	Attennnn-shun!		Attention.

	Oh...		Ah...
	Hi...		Thank you...

	Bow.		Bow!
	Good morning, sir.		Good morning!

	Good...		G...
	...Morning.		Good morning.
	Be seated-		Take your seats!

	Relaaaaax.		Don't mess this up!
	I-I know, Asuna-san.		I-I know, Asuna-san!

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	Picking up from yesterday...		All right, let's start first period.
	Let's turn to page 128 in our texts.		Please open your books to page 76.

	"The fall of Jason the flower. Spring came. Jason the flower was born on a branch of a tall tree. Hundreds of flowers were born on the tree. They were all friends."		The fall of Jason the flower, Jason the flower was born on a branch of a tall tree. Hundreds of flowers were born on the tree. They were all friends.
	So far, so good. Thirty seconds and no riots. A record.		After the disaster that was yesterday, I have to work hard.

	Who can translate this passage into Japanese? Anyone?		Would someone volunteer to translate that passage?
	Anyone?		Let's see....

	...		......
	...		......

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	Asuna-san!		Asuna-san?
	Wh-Why me!?		Wh... Why are you calling on me!?

	Be-Because...		Eh...? Well...
	Because why? Why not start with somebody else?!?		Teachers usually go by date, or alphabetical order!

	Because I thought you'd like the opportunity-		But Asuna, your name starts with an A.
	"Opportunity?!"		Asuna is my first name!
	...to show off your knowledge for your classmates.		And I wanted to thank you....
	Well you're wrong!		What kind of thanks is this!?

	So Asuna, you admit you don't get this passage.		So you're saying you don't know the answer, Asuna-san.
	That's not-		WHA!?
	I'll do it for you...		Then I, the class repesenative, will answe for you.

	Fine, I'll translate it, okay?		F-Fine, I'll translate it.
	Umm...		Umm...

	Jason was...on the flower... and fell. Then spring came? Jason and the flower.		Jason... Fell... on flowers. Spring came? Jason and the flowers...
	Let's see... They ate brunch on the tall tree... And then there were bones... hundreds of them?		Um... Had brunch on a tall tree... There were... a hundred bones?

	That is... Bones... Were... The trees...		Umm... The bones... on the tree...
	...		......

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	Okay... Not bad. Not good, but-		Asuna-san, you're bad at English, aren't you?
	Not good-?!		WHA...!?

	She's not much better at math.		Asuna's not just bad at English. She's terrible at math, too.
	Or literature...		And grammar...
	Or science or history.		And science and social studies.
	She's so dumb she thought...		In other words, she's stupid.

	...that Rainbow Bridge was a card game.		The only things she's good at are health and PE.

	You tried to embarrass me, didn't you!		L... Look at you! I told you a million times this morning not to defy me!
	No...!		Eep...!

	I... Uh...		Erp!

	Ah...		Ah...
	Ah...		Ah...
	Uh oh...!?		Erk...!?

	AHCHOO!!		ACHOO!!
	Wait!		Just a...
	Don't-!		Hey!

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	AIEEE		UHYAAAAA!
	Aieee		Kyaa!

	Boy! Drafty in here!		Where did that wind come from?
	Hey!		WAH!
	Good move, Asuna-san...		Just a...
	...with your grades, a career as a stripper is your best bet.		Asuna-san! Why on earth are you removing your clothing?

	I'm going...		I...
	...to kill you!!		I'll kill you!!

	AIEEE...		Eep...!

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	Sigh		Sigh...
	I thought I was helping Asuna-san...		I did something terrible to Asuna-san again.

	But I just embarrassed her again.		She glared at me for the rest of class.
	She just glared at me for the rest of class.		She must be mad at me.

	Um, Negi-sensei...		Um, Negi-sensei...
	Hmm...		Eh...?
	Yes!?		Ah, yes!?

	Can we ask you about today's lesson?		Excuse us, Negi-sensei. We have a question about your lecture this morning.

	Sure. What's your question... Haruna-san, right?		Ah, right, yes. All right. Um... Number 14, Haruna Saotome-san.
	Right name, but not my question. It's her's.		Oh, it's not my question. It's hers.
	Oh, okay.		Oh, right.

	No...doka?		...huh?
	Yes. I...		Eh?

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	I like your new hairdo. Looks nice.		Miyazaki-san, you changed your hair. It looks nice.
	I told you!		Eh...?

	I told you he'd notice it!		I know, right!?
	It's such a cute do!		Don't you think she's cute!?
	Huh...		Eh...?
	She finally got it out of her face.		She's so cute, and yet she never shows her face.
	Hey...		Uh...

	Hey, Nodoka-san!!		Ah! Miyazaki-san!?

	Oh, Nodoka!		Ah! Wait, Nodoka!
	Sorry, Negi-sensei.		Nodoka!
	Negi-		Er... Uh...
	Huh... Oh...		Sorry, Sensei!

	Okay. That was strange.		What was that about...? I guess she didn't need to ask her question after all.

	I guess they all are in different ways.		Ohh, if only all of them were mild-mannered.
	But Asuna-san... She's stranger than most.		Compared to her, Asuna-san is...

	Man, what do I do about-?		Whew. What should I do?
	Hm?		...Nn?

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	Th-This is...!?		Th-This is...!?
	...That tube of "Magic Essence" pills Grandfather gave me...!!		The Magic Essence Pills Seven-Color Set (For Adult Use) that Ojī-chan gave me a long time ago...

	I could maybe make a love potion with this!!		W-With this, I might be able to make something like a love potion!
	Anya must have packed it in my bag for me.		Onē-chan must have put it in my bag for me!
	All right then!		All right!

	Um...		Erk...
--			...Better not tell Asuna yet.

	Right now she doesn't trust me...		It's true, this probably won't get her to forgive me.
	...And I can't blame her.		But this is all I can do....

	Ras Ter Ma Skil		Ras Tel Ma Scir
	Makistel		Magister.

	Age Nascatur		Age Nascatur
	Potion Amoris!!		Potio Amoris!!

	I...		I...
	I did it.		I did it!

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	It's gonna work! I know it! Once she drinks this, Takamichi won't be able to resist her!		If she drinks this, anything of the opposite sex will fall for fer! Including humans, of course.
	Then she'll forgive me!		I'm sure Asuna-san will like it!!
	Negi looks excited!		Who's that?
	Wonder why?		You know. It's the kid teacher!
	Tee Hee		Giggle giggle

	Asuna-san! Asuna-san!		Asuna-san! Asuna-saaaan!
	Oh, what luck. I was tired of being dressed,		...Negi-bōzu's back.

	What do you want?		What do you want!?
	I did it! I did it!		Actually, I did it! I did it!!

	Did what?		Did what?
	Love potion. The love potion.		A love potion!
	I made it!		I made it!

	C'mon! I'm sure it works!		Ah! Wait! It really will work!
	What happened to "four months."		I told you I don't want it. ...Ugh.

	I found a short cut! Try it!		It's true! If you think I'm lying, then you can try just a little...

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	You try it, Mr. Wizard!		You drink it.
	HUMMPH		HMRPHLE!
	GULPP		GLUG

	And maybe you'll get your clothes torn off this time...		Why would I ever drink something made by the guy who accidentally destroyed my underwear?

	...		......
	Hak		Nnwaah...

	Huh, figures.		See? Nothing's happening.
	That's strange. It should work...		Huh...? That's weird.

	No, it shouldn't. Y'know why?		I don't know what you think you're doing.
	Because you suck at magic.		But this isn't going to cheer me up.

	Hmf.		Hmph!
	Sorry. I guess magic's like love.		I-I thought not.
	No shortcuts.		I'm sorry....
	Negi-kun...		Negi-kun...

	...The longer I stare at you...		You know, when I look at you closely,
	...The more adorable you look.		you're really cute.

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	Konoka-san?		Nn?

	Hmmmm <3		Mmmm <3
	Konoka! Get a grip!		H-Hey!
	And I don't mean on him!		What are you doing, Konoka-san!?

	As Class Rep,		I will not tolerate such inappropriate treatment of our teach...
	I will not tolerate this...		Er...
	This...		......

	...This bouquet of flowers going to anyone but you, Negi-sensei! <3		Sensei, please accept these....
	?!		!?

	I baked this dessert for you in cooking class!		Sensei! Eat this <3 I made it in Home-Ec!
	This outfit I made for my kid brother would fit you!		Sensei, take this, too! We just happened to be making children's clothes...

	Let's get his new clothes on him... And these off!		Okay, let's take those clothes off!
	Say aw! <3		Now say ah <3
	C'mon!		Aaahhh! Stop...!
	Knock it off!		Please stop!
	Huh. Guess it does work at that.		It works!? It was real? Dang it!

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	Negi-sensei! Come back!		Negi-sensei!
	Asuna-san! Hellllpppp!		Asuna-san, help me!

	You're kidding, right?		...Ugh, you're so hopeless!

	A-Asuna! Where'd he go?!		A-Asuna-san! Where did you hide Negi-sensei!?
	UNNGH		NGGH!

	Snap out of it, Ayaka!		Pull yourself together, Class Rep!
	Huh		Ah!

	AIEEEEE		Waaaahhh!
	We love you, Negi-sensei!!		Negi-sensei!

	Hey!		Ah.
	Nodoka-san! Hide me!		Miyazaki-san, look out!

	From who, sir?		Wh... What's the matter?
	Hiding now! Explaining later!		W-Well, um, something happened, and now the whole class is after me!

	Okay, this way, sir.		Then come this way!
	Huh		Ah!

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	You're a lifesaver, Nodoka-san.		Th-Thank you very much!
	No problem.		It's no trouble...
	I locked it so you should be safe for...		I locked the door, so we should be okay for a while...

	...Now?		......

	Wow- <3		WAAAAH <3

	This library's huge!		This is a big library.
	Never seen so many books!		There are so many books! It's incredible!
	Oh, uh... Yes.		Y-Yes.

	The school was founded by a European a long time ago.		This school is very old, It was built by someone from Europe.
	Plenty of time to amass a collection.		It's been around for a long time, so its collection of books is enormous.
	But the college library has millions more.		But the collection at Library Island in the university district is a thousand times bigger.
	Wow-		Wow!

	So you're the library expert, huh?		You must know all about it, Miyazaki-san.
	Oh... No...		N... No...

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	...		......

	Wh-What's wrong?		I-Is something the matter?

	Oh, Negi-sensei... <3		Negi-sensei <3
	Asu-!		Asu...
	Asuna-san-!		Asuna-saaaan!

	Negi! Okay! I'm ready to help you now!		Ugh! Where did that Negi-bōzu go!?

	Stupid kid was just trying to help me.		Maybe I overdid it a little back there.
	This time it's my fault...		He is just a kid...
	Negi-sensei! <3		Negi-sensei <3

	!		Ah!
	That sounded like Bookstore Girl's voice!		Was that Bookstore-chan's voice!?

	Stop!		Ah!

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	AIEEEE		WAAAH!
	AIEEE		KYAAA!

	Ouch...		Owww...
	A-Are you all right, Nodoka-san?		A... Are you all right, Miyazaki-san?

	Oh...		Ah...

	Oh...		Ah...

	NO...		Eep...!
	OH, WATCH OUT!		W-Watch out!

	What...		Eh...?

	Wheeee!		Eek!
	ARGH		Gwah!

	Now what?!		Ack! What is this?
	It's locked?!?		It's locked!

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	I've never been...		Er... Um.
	...With a man before.		Miyazaki-san...
	Well, me neither.		Please get off me.

	Oh...		Y...
	...Negi...		Yes...

	Oh... Brother.		Wa-Wa-Wah... She's staring at me!
	Why'd I make that dumb potion?		This must be because of the love potion!

	Uh		Wah!

	Nodoka! Stop!		Wa-Wa-Wah!

	When you recover your senses...		M-Miyazaki-san, don't!
	You'll hate yourself! Or me!		Teachers aren't supposed to do this with their students!
	Or... Or both!		That's what Onē-chan says...

	I... I suppose...		Y-Yes...
	You're right.		You're right...

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	...		......
	Wait. No. You're wrong.		I'm sorry...
	I could never hate you.		You're not doing what you're saying!!

	Focus chi. And... HIIII		Why you...! Negi-bōzu...!

	YAAAAAH!!!		WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING!!?
	Argh		Eep!
	AIEEE		WAAAH!

	Asuna-san! Could'a killed somebody!		A-Asuna-san!!
	Geez.		Th-That's not safe!
	Boy, there's gratitude!		Ah! Bookstore-chan! ...I mean Miyazaki! You're here, too?
	I-I'm sorry!		S-Sorry!

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	"Magister Magi" Negi...		Ugh...
	More like "Master Ingrate."		You are such a handful!
	Y-You're right. Thanks. And, nice kick.		Th-Thank you very much, Asuna-san! You really saved me!

	Huh...		Huh...?
	?		?
	What were we doing...?		What in the world were we doing...?

	Another day, another fiasco.		Argh, another crazy day today!
	What's tomorrow, Negi-sensei? A plague?		I'm sorry. I'm always so much trouble...

	Thanks for saving me, Asuna-san.		...But why did you come help me?

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	I didn't. I saved Nodoka from humiliating herself.		I wasn't helping you. I was helping Bookstore-chan.
	Yeah, sure you did.		...Oh, r-right.

	Stop causing trouble! Get it?		You meed to pell yourself together, Sensei!
	Got it!		Y-Yes'm!

	Why's the day a blur to me?		I'm kinda out of it today.
--			Did something happen?
	Don't knock it.		Oh... R-Really?

	Hey! What'd you just write in your student list!		Ah! Hey! You wrote something on the class roster!
	Come on, let's see!		Gimme that! Let me see it!
	Nothing!		Eh? No!
	Just a note!		I was just writing notes, that's all....
	Negi-kun? Where'd you get that hickey from?		Ehhh? What'd you write, Negi-kun <3